Avatar started out the race riding in the back but close to the end of the race the made it to the front and in the last few seconds of the race him and another horse were neck and neck but Avatar pulled ahead in the end and won. Kris was so happy. She couldn't believe it she had won the Kentucky Derby. A ranch hand lead Avatar to the winners circle and the Davis family, the Ritters, Brian, Kerry, and Pablo came down form the stands and came running over. "All my God. Great job Kris" Ken said. "Ya great job" Dani said. "we won'' Dani screamed to Ken and Junior. The Ritters all congratulated her and Kerry told her what a great job she did and so did Brian. Pablo came over to her "Way to go Kris" he said. "same to you. You trained him" Kris said to Pablo as she leaned down form Avatar and gave Pablo a hug. They all took tuns of pictures and Kris had to set on Avatar for a long time as they took them. Finally they were done taking pictures. Ken and Pablo had to go a do an interview since Avatar won and Dani went with them. The Ritters, Kerry, and Brian went back to the hotel. Junior went over and pulled Kris down from Avatar. "You did amazing" he said still holding her. He gave her a kiss and sat her down. Kris went to go change and then she had to do an interview since she won and then they all went back to the hotel. That night they all went out to dinner to celebrate and after that they all went back to the hotel because they all were on the three am flight back to California. They had to be at the air port at one-thirty in the morning and it was nine o'clock when they got back from dinner. Every one went back to there rooms and got ready and went to bed. Kris could not fall asleep right away. She had her head on Juniors chest and she thought about the race. She won. She had won the Kentucky Derby. Her career was going good. She had Junior and the Ritters. For the first time in a long time everything was perfect................................................BUT HOW LONG WILL IT LAST? TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Wednesday, August 22, 2007
Winning
~Ideas are helpful and thanks for reading. Sorry this chapter was short!!!~
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3 comments:
that was really good i love ur story as well but thats soo exciting how kris won the kentucky derby thats HUGE!!!
ahhh veryy nice!! i loved it! update sooooooon :D
short but amazing!!!
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